The tobacco industry
The tobacco industry
The tobacco industry is probably one of the most counterproductive industries on earth and there are tons of studies and researches that proves it. To find something positively associated with the tobacco industry is comparable to something like time travelling, both things are impossible to achieve.
I believe that it would would only be advantageous to prohibit the production of tobacco.
The tobacco industry is a way to big industry as to ban it right away. But Rome wasn't built in a day, as they say. It would require a lot of work, but humanity has surprised us before.
People who smoke are enjoying to smoke and they are feeling good also. You can also get calm.
Smoking Kills. Cigarette smoking contributes to more than 480 thousand deaths every year in just the U.S and that's almost 1,5% of the population. And thats when we not include the the second hand smokers, people that passively inhale tobacco smoke while they are not smoking. Recent researches also shows that since 1964, 2,5 million people has died because of second hand smoking.
So with this I want to say that the tobacco industry is a very bad industry that effects family and friends in a bad way. So I want the tobacco industry to cut down their producing in a few years.
I believe that it would would only be advantageous to prohibit the production of tobacco.
The tobacco industry is a way to big industry as to ban it right away. But Rome wasn't built in a day, as they say. It would require a lot of work, but humanity has surprised us before.
People who smoke are enjoying to smoke and they are feeling good also. You can also get calm.
Smoking Kills. Cigarette smoking contributes to more than 480 thousand deaths every year in just the U.S and that's almost 1,5% of the population. And thats when we not include the the second hand smokers, people that passively inhale tobacco smoke while they are not smoking. Recent researches also shows that since 1964, 2,5 million people has died because of second hand smoking.
So with this I want to say that the tobacco industry is a very bad industry that effects family and friends in a bad way. So I want the tobacco industry to cut down their producing in a few years.
Title:
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Introduction:
Yes he do. He starts to tell the readers a little about the tobacco industry and what he thinks about the subject.
Argument:
Yes I think he does. He writes about how smoking affects you and that 480 thousand people dies of it every year. And that since 1964 2,5 million has dies of it.
Counter Argument:
No he hasn’t.
Summary and conclusion:
No it isn’t.
Langugage:
The text is written very good and there isn’t any errors in the text.